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Essay 1

For this assignment, I was asked to write a descriptive essay. I chose to write about an exceptionally messy room.


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English 103

2 September 2011

Descriptive
Essay

            As I walked into the room I was overcome with the strong
musty odor. A few steps into the room when I looked down I saw crusty,
discolored socks that looked like they had walked through mud without shoes on.
To the left of these socks were old, worn out tennis shoes with little, dirty,
white strings sticking out of the now tan colored tattered sides of them. The
dark plastic laundry basket was overflowing onto the floor with wrinkled
clothes. Light wash faded worn jeans with holes the size of quarters laid
across an old silver metal chair. Bright, vibrant red shirts with cheerful white
letters littered the shiny black leather computer chair.

The
desk in front of the computer chair was a smooth dull grey surface, at least
what you could see of it. Crumpled papers covered a majority of the desk and open
books were scattered across the papers. In the corner of the desk, a black
laptop sat closed with vibrant colors of sticky notes stuck to it. Bright blue
pens were laid out at random across the desk beside rolls of clear tape and
bottles of white out. Underneath the desk, a backpack lay wide open with deep
red and green folders spilling out of it. The bed in the room was rumpled with
clothes that had been thrown randomly around. Bed sheets were tangled at the
end of the bed in a ball of knots; pillows were laying half out of their patterned
pillow cases. It looked like a vicious tornado had ripped through the room and
left all the possessions in a complete mess.

The
smooth, hard wood floor was hardly recognizable underneath all of the random
items that were thrown throughout the room. A roughly lined blue skateboard
with bright lime green wheels lay on the floor ahead with the wheels facing up.
Next to that, there were shiny silver wrenches and other tools laying there
just waiting to be used on the board. A bright white baseball with dark red
strings sat inside an old, worn, black and brown glove. Black and white
baseball cleats with shiny silver spikes lay next to the door. The bottoms on
them were caked with light brown mud and pieces of deep green grass.  A garbage can stood next to the baseball
glove and skateboard.

 The black mesh garbage can was no bigger than
two feet tall. Just by looking at it, I already knew that it hadn’t been
emptied in a long time. The see through, brown Kroger bag in the can was ripped
in small areas, no bigger than the size of peas. Old, torn tissues were shoved
down into the bag, making the can look like it consisted of all blue and white.
There were microwavable macaroni and cheese containers with a light film of the
bright, yellow liquid cheese, overflowing from the top of the bag.

Old
dishes lay in various places. The dishware that was in the room made it look
like they hadn’t been moved or cleaned in months. Bowls covered with crusty,
dried food, cups with green, fuzzy mold growing on the inside of them. Plates
with dried up bread crumbs on them that looked like a little army of ants.
There was a knife laid across the plate with light brown peanut butter caked
onto it still. White napkins with flower designs on them were crumpled and
smeared with the peanut butter from being used to wipe their mouths. After
seeing what the room looked like I was in complete shock that anyone could
manage to live in such a messy condition and not think twice about it. 

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